No. JUST NO.
Don't post tests like this on newgrounds. It is a sure way to get you hated.
The drawings were bad, The particles were bad. The actionscript was okay.
Work on it more.
Posting tests is a good way to get intelligent criticisms about he flash, like in this - oh wait. you didn't go into much detail. I'm sorry.
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